ABOUT ME
My name is Eliza Fadhliah. I was born in Padang, West Sumatra, on July 11st, 1992. Now, I am 18 years old. The color of my hair is brown and my eyes are black. I have a pointed nose like my mother. My weight is 47 kg and my height is 167 cm, my friends always talk to me if I am a thin girl. I am a student of Padang State University (UNP), faculty of Language and Art, major in English literature. I am second child in my family. I have two sisters. My older sister is a student of Padang State University, too. Faculty of education, major in Indonesian language, her name is Amy. My younger sister is studies at Islamic State Junior High School Kuranji. Her name is Dinda. My father works at Department of Education on Sudirman Street. My mother is an Indonesian language teacher at State Junior High School 31 Padang.
I have many hobbies like reading some novels (mystery novels, romantic novels, and other novels), before I go to bed, I always read novel or other books. Otherwise, I can not sleep. Then, my hobby is watching movies (action, mystery, drama musical, and romantic), watching good movies can make me be addicted, I can watch the movie until four or five times a day. I also like playing computer games. Playing computer games is the most important for me, when I have so many tasks, I have break for refreshing by playing games. And then I love listening to music, music is my life, without music my world will be boring, so every time and everywhere I like listening to music.
In my childhood, I had so many ambitions for my future. When I was at Kindergarten I was so ambitious to be a doctor, I was not sure why I was so ambitious, but I though that was a good job in my mind, when I was playing with my friends, I used to become a doctor, that was funny. Then, when I was at Primary School, I had new ambition to be an athlete. When I was at Primary School I used to join in the sports competition of Primary School level. That was great and fantastic for me, because I used to become the second or the third winner. In the Junior High School I had different ambition, I wanted to join UNESCO. I thought like that, because my aunt in Medan is a member of UNESCO, I thought that was excited job for me. I could meet many people in the world. That motivated me to join UNESCO someday. The ambition continued until I was senior high school student.
I am a friendly person. I like have so many friends, I feel happy when my friends can be comfortable to be my friends. Among of them, I just have a best friend. Her name is Yola. I know Yola when I was the first year at Junior High School. Yola and I went to Senior High School 5. Right now, Yola and I have different ambition. Yola has ambition to be a midwife, so, she studies at STIKes Mercubakti Jaya Padang. Her major in obstetrics, I have different ambition from Yola, I like to get a job at an office and I still have ambition to join with world organizations to help people in the world. Although we have different ambition, we are still friends.
That is all about me, every moment the most important for me. I am not alone, I have family, I have so many friends and I have an ambition to exist. I have to be success person in my future.
11st it should be 11th
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ReplyDeleteI am second child in my family = I am the second child in my family
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My weight is 47 kg and my height is 167 cm, my friends always talk to me if I am a thin girl. --> My friends always tell me that I am a VERY thin girl. Hahahaha....
ReplyDeleteMy younger sister is studies at Islamic State Junior High School Kuranji. --> my younger sister is studying at......
My father works at Department of Education on Sudirman Street. --> my father is working at......
Your essay is about yourself, why do u describe bout your friend???
overall, be careful when do writing task n improve it next time. keep moving forward!!!!
why did you put your family photo there??
ReplyDeleteit will better to write about yourself, , make it more specific